Good Writing Reflects Clear ThinkingPosted: November 14, 2011 Filed under: novel writing, Uncategorized, writing | Tags: humor, journalism, novel writing, Writing 4 Comments
One of the most useful things I learned in Journalism School, I learned in the first fifteen minutes of my first class on the first day. The two Deans of the University of Missouri J-School stood at the bottom of the large lecture hall and tag-teamed a speech about the art and science of Journalism; the rigors and importance of its study. I remember shockingly little of what they said. I remember that one of the Deans was a lady with short red hair who wore a pantsuit. I remember I didn’t see her again until graduation. And I remember that she began her portion of the lecture with the simple truism, “Good writing reflects clear thinking.”
Over the years, I have referred back to this sentence more than any other piece of writing advice I received since. It has become my writing mantra. These words focus and tighten my work. They eliminate pages of unnecessary qualifiers and distracting tangents. They crystallize tedious, rambling diversions into concise, readable information. Good writing reflects clear thinking. I hear the Dean’s voice in my head; picture her in her beige pants suit pacing back and forth like some kind of smartly dressed caged tiger – full of pent-up insight and knowledge.
But this advice applies to more than just Journalism. As I write my first novel, this dictum serves as my talisman – sitting on my shoulder, strong and true in its own little pantsuit; a beacon of efficiency. It reminds me that good writing is more than just stringing words together in a pleasing way. The words have to say something. They can’t simply be page-candy, there only to decorate and sound pretty. Even the most beautifully written prose must earn its keep by informing, enlightening, or advancing the story.
Here is how this all works in action: I write something. I read it over. If I decide it sucks (which I almost always do on the first pass), I repeat my mantra. Good writing reflects clear thinking. I re-read what I wrote. More often than not, the problem is not with the words themselves. The problem is I didn’t know what I wanted to say. It wasn’t clear to me –so how could it possibly be clear on the page? The words never stood a chance. I focus. I ask myself what I am trying to say in this sentence, this paragraph, this chapter. And if I am lucky enough to come up with an answer, the words follow – lining up like obedient soldiers doing their duty to ink and paper. The writing becomes strong, if not good, and we move on to the next battle.
Good writing reflects clear thinking. My arrogant 18 year-old self heard this and thought something banal like, “No duh.” But fortunately my sub-conscious knew better. It stored this little nugget in the depths of my brain until I was ready to understand that no amount of clever word play will make up for a writer’s ambivalence of purpose.
I pass this on with the hope that it helps other writers as much as it has helped me.
We have only met a few times…………..I worked for your Mom when I first started out in Real Estate 16 yrs ago and we have remained friends ever since! I have utterly enjoyed Every single one of your Blogs and it is about time that I told you that!!!! I used to read Lisa Kogan’s column in the O Magazine with total enjoyment and still love Joel Stein in Time Magazine: I feel the same sense of enjoyment, humor and totally connected/related shared human experiences when I read your Blog!!!! Keep the great stories coming! I anxiously await the novel!! All the best to you and your family, Pat Denenberg
Hi Pat! Wow. You just made my day – no, my week!!! Lisa Kogan is one of my most favorite-ever columnists and to even be mentioned in the same sentence as her, is a HUGE compliment. Thank you so much for your kind words and for reading… you have no idea how much I appreciate the support 🙂 Hope you and your family are well! Take care, j.
I mean it sincerely! I read her Someone Will Be With You Shortly and, although you have more than one child and a husband who lives on the same continent, you and she are soulmates to be sure!! Me too but I can’t write!!! All the Best, Pat
Jill, your “clear thinking and clear writing” is apparent and surely came way before journalism school but it is nice to see the Deans agree with you. Grammy and I enjoy each of your cheerful and entertaining posts and look forward to them. Always keep up the fun and happy outlook on everything and yours will always be an extra fun life. Love, Papa and Grammy